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Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #education #hunger #food #aid
Nowadays, there has been considerably discrepancy of view, that education is the key to fighting
with
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hunger
 worldwide, whether some thoughts
that
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food
 support.
However
, from my point of view, the best tool for
save
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hunger
live
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 is emergency
food
 aid.
Therefore
, I firmly support the latter view.
This
 essay will examine both sides. On the one hand, I want to mention the cause of
hunger
. These are conflicts, and climate change, where the main role is played by human activity, including the level of ignorance
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humanity. The after-effects of the COVID-19 pandemic contribute to a sharp increase in the number of hungry people according to the report of The World
Food
 Programme. Eliminating the threat of
hunger
 and completely preventing
hunger
 will require longer-term and more complex interventions, including strengthening education.
Therefore
, many people hold
this
 opinion.
Moreover
,
along with
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emergency
food
 aid, advanced technologies,
logistics
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 supply chains are
also
 the main measures to combat
hunger
. Since the topic under discussion is fighting the consequences, namely
hunger
 worldwide, and not the cause of
hunger
, I support the previous opinion. According to the report of The World
Food
 Programme «Fighting famine» in Yemen, World
Food
 Programme’s largest-ever
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 of
food
 assistance.
In addition
, from 1 million people in 2015 to nearly 13 million helped avert famine in 2019. In conclusion, it can hardly be denied that famine cannot be inevitable - with proper planning and coordination, it can be prevented and millions of lives saved. the use of various tools both to prevent
hunger
 and to respond to it.
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