Some people believe in 100 years, our lives will be much easier, others are uncertain about this. What is your oponion?

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century,
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has significantly changed.
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, some think
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is heading
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too easy in the
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but others disagree with
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view. In
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regard, I believe in we are living easier than
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past because of many factors
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as technology.
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, nowadays with the help of some
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improvements
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improvements
, particularly
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technology and science,
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life
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became much
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convenient
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. So, some socialists and critics presume that
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of human
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has been improving based on
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historical evidence and
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trend probably will be continued
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100 years. One of the most prominent factors is
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index.
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, the vast majority of
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infectious
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as Pox which had been able to kill million
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people
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, completely eradicated because of recent medical
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, some research has shown public's purchasing ability increased
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to the past.
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, it can be
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that we are heading toward
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easier
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lifestyle.
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, the lack of enough food and water resources and
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the shortage of efficient medicines worldwide, cause some
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that human
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gradually is becoming more difficult.
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, uncontrolled exploitation of underground reservoirs and using fossil energies have an undeniable negative impact on the earth.
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,
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's living quality has been under the influence of
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unsustainable actions.
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, a large number of
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are
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dying
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annually because of global warming due the industrial operations. In my viewpoint,
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, there are
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worrying aspects of the
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, it definitely will be hopeful in the
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totally because of many environmental friendly movements. In conclusion, heading toward
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dark or bright
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depends on the correct sight
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the recent actions of humans. So, we should choose true at the moment and try to be optimistic about the
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