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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Nowadays, learning foreign
languages
 has become more common. While some
people
 think the only reason why
people
 should learn other
languages
 is for work or travel, argue that there are more
reasons
 contributing to
this
 case and I personally think they are right. On the one hand, the point of learning a
language
 is that one can
use
 it to communicate with others.
This
 is why some
people
 think the only reason for learning other
languages
 is for work purposes or travelling.
This
 is considered a practical
use
 of knowing a foreign
language
. In
this
 case, there is no need to learn the advanced details of the
language
 and the person can
use
 it for communication with other
people
. The
people
 who think these
reasons
 are the only things that matter during learning a
language
 argue that practical
use
 of
language
 is more important.
For example
, if someone gets a job offer from another country, it gives him a strong reason for learning the
language
 of that country.
On the other hand
, there is actually more to a
language
 than just learning how to communicate,
therefore
,
people
 believe there are lots of
reasons
 for learning a
language
. By doing so,
people
 can read books from other countries and become more familiar with their literature. Learning a foreign
language
also
 enables
people
 how to watch foreign movies in their original form and get more information about their culture and the way
people
 of these countries live. Since translation cannot always convert the meaning of these things, a lot of
people
 study other
languages
 for these
reasons
. In conclusion, while it is true that many
people
 learn other
languages
 just because of work or travel, I think there are Muslims contributing to the purpose of learning foreign
languages
.
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