some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and age together.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Music
is the most popular thing in youth and
cultures
. Few
people
say that
music
is an ideal way of bonding public in various
cultures
and different age group
people
together.
However
, I agree with the statement. In
this
essay should give your personal opinion and the contrary as well.
To begin
with, I support
this
idea because of several reasons.
such
as In different
music
concerts different
ages
group and
cultures
people
are gel together.
In other words
, Different
ages
people
and
cultures
are participating in concerts. They used to get a vibe together without knowing about the cast and
ages
.
For instance
, In Pakistan Asim Azhar concert is popular among all
cultures
and
ages
group so I go to attend that concert while vibing
people
on different
songs
and without knowing their culture and
ages
that why
music
bring
people
together.
Moreover
, I would like to outline one more impact of the
music
being
people
together.
people
in
national
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the national
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anthem stand together among different
cultures
and age groups. while many
people
forget their culture and age and
also
stand together national anthem.
For example
,
people
have grudges about their culture but in different situations
such
as Pakistan vs India match
people
gel together while singing
national
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the national
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anthem.
On the other hand
, there are so many things which
brings
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people
together so it does not mean that few
people
is
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also totally disagree
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also
totally disagree with it.
Music
can
also
create damage to society as well
such
as some
the
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songs
are
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being
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made for different
cultures
which spirits hate for them. Many
songs
disrespect the region of different
people
. To illustrate, Most Indian, singers are spirits who hate Islam and disrespect other regions.
Furthermore
,
People
who disagree with the statement. Nowadays singers use abusive words in their
songs
so
people
cannot hear while with family members.
For instance
, I was singing
songs
with family members but there was some abuse which made me shame in front of them. To sum up, The vast majority of
people
say that
music
is a brilliant idea for bringing
people
together of different
cultures
and
ages
. I agree with the statement due to
music
concerts gel
people
together and while some national
songs
they can stand together of the same nationality .
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