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some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and age together.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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Music
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 is the most popular thing in youth and
cultures
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. Few
people
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 say that
music
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 is an ideal way of bonding public in various
cultures
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 and different age group
people
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 together.
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, I agree with the statement. In
this
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 essay should give your personal opinion and the contrary as well.
To begin
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 with, I support
this
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 idea because of several reasons.
such
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 as In different
music
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 concerts different
ages
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 group and
cultures
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people
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 are gel together.
In other words
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, Different
ages
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people
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 and
cultures
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 are participating in concerts. They used to get a vibe together without knowing about the cast and
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.
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, In Pakistan Asim Azhar concert is popular among all
cultures
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 and
ages
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 group so I go to attend that concert while vibing
people
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 on different
songs
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 and without knowing their culture and
ages
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 that why
music
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 bring
people
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 together.
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, I would like to outline one more impact of the
music
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 being
people
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 together.
people
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 in
national
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 anthem stand together among different
cultures
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 and age groups. while many
people
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 forget their culture and age and
also
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 stand together national anthem.
For example
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,
people
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 have grudges about their culture but in different situations
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 as Pakistan vs India match
people
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 gel together while singing
national
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the national
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 anthem.
On the other hand
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, there are so many things which
brings
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bring
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people
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 together so it does not mean that few
people
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is
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also totally disagree
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also
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 totally disagree with it.
Music
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 can
also
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 create damage to society as well
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 as some
the
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apply
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songs
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are
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being
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 made for different
cultures
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 which spirits hate for them. Many
songs
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 disrespect the region of different
people
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. To illustrate, Most Indian, singers are spirits who hate Islam and disrespect other regions.
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,
People
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 who disagree with the statement. Nowadays singers use abusive words in their
songs
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 so
people
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 cannot hear while with family members.
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, I was singing
songs
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 with family members but there was some abuse which made me shame in front of them. To sum up, The vast majority of
people
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 say that
music
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 is a brilliant idea for bringing
people
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 together of different
cultures
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 and
ages
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. I agree with the statement due to
music
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 concerts gel
people
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 together and while some national
songs
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 they can stand together of the same nationality .
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