Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen

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Dear Mr John, I am writing

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letter to request you about your pet

dog

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which you buy the previous week.Your pet

dog

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makes noise all the time especially, at

night

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,we can not sleep well the because of the bark of your dogs. As you know,we are hard-working people,my work schedule is very busy from early morning six am to late

night

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nine pm.

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, I am so tired because of work so I need well sleep at

night

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.If I could not sleep well,my work performance gone poor.

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,it directly affects my job carrier

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can lose my job. I extremely request to you to make silent at the

night

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,you may keep your

dog

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inside the room at

night

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.After doing these I believe the sound might be low volume.

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,all day you can leave your

dog

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anywhere your wish. I look forward to receiving your swift response, Your's sincerely, Gobinda Mudvhari

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

constantly barks
disturbance
sleep deprivation
our community
considerate
reasonable request
mutual understanding
possible solutions
bring the dog indoors
bark collar
dog trainer
vet advice
distressed pet
resolve this issue
accommodative
soundproofing
wellbeing
peaceful environment
necessary steps

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Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Describe some of the problems overreliance on cars can cause and suggest a possible solution.

In some parts of the world, people have become more focused on themselves than their communities. What problems can this situation cause and how can they be solved?

People tend to work longer hours nowadays. Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves, their family and the society so working long hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?