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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#technologies #lives #consumers
It is certainly true that modern technologies and the options
of
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 sales are changing our lives as customers for the better. Modern technology is a product of our age and we should be thankful and grateful for its possibilities.
This
 essay will extensively support
this
 based on
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real-life
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real life
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example
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.
To begin
 with, current shopping is not only more convenient and easier but
also
 it is faster and
economize
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 than the previous way of shopping, in terms of
time
.
Instead
 of travelling to purchase some
items
,
spending
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and spending
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time
 and extra money on gas nowadays you can get everything you need
just
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one click on your mobile phone or computer.
Moreover
, many shopping online stores offer extremely good prices, discounts, coupons, happy days and even free delivery if a customer gets a certain amount of goods.
Secondly
,
instead
 of throwing old stuff or unused
items
, some websites produce chances for the customers to sell ones to get some money back.
For instance
, some clothes become old-fashioned and unsuitable in prevalent tendencies, but there are always people who are ready to pay good money to the owners if the
items
 are in good
conditions
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.
In addition
,
on
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one
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person
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a person
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 can live in one place and can sell stuff
along
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in
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 another part of the country or even in different countries.
For example
, if someone has some antique or even unique
items
 to sell, they can just upload ton social networks like Instagram or Facebook and sell
it
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at
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 no
time
. In conclusion, it goes without saying that
humans’
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humans
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 lives have been improving significantly recently and, personally, I think that shopping online is one of the best
invention
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 of our
time
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transforming
  • consumers
  • buying and selling
  • new technologies
  • revolutionized
  • consumer experience
  • e-commerce
  • convenience
  • range of options
  • mobile payment systems
  • transactions
  • challenges
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