New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is certainly true that modern technologies and the options
of
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sales are changing our lives as customers for the better. Modern technology is a product of our age and we should be thankful and grateful for its possibilities.
This
essay will extensively support
this
based on
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real life
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example
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To begin
with, current shopping is not only more convenient and easier but
also
it is faster and
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than the previous way of shopping, in terms of
time
.
Instead
of travelling to purchase some
items
,
spending
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time
and extra money on gas nowadays you can get everything you need
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one click on your mobile phone or computer.
Moreover
, many shopping online stores offer extremely good prices, discounts, coupons, happy days and even free delivery if a customer gets a certain amount of goods.
Secondly
,
instead
of throwing old stuff or unused
items
, some websites produce chances for the customers to sell ones to get some money back.
For instance
, some clothes become old-fashioned and unsuitable in prevalent tendencies, but there are always people who are ready to pay good money to the owners if the
items
are in good
conditions
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In addition
,
on
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one
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person
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a person
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can live in one place and can sell stuff
along
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in
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another part of the country or even in different countries.
For example
, if someone has some antique or even unique
items
to sell, they can just upload ton social networks like Instagram or Facebook and sell
it
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at
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no
time
. In conclusion, it goes without saying that
humans’
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lives have been improving significantly recently and, personally, I think that shopping online is one of the best
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of our
time
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transforming
  • consumers
  • buying and selling
  • new technologies
  • revolutionized
  • consumer experience
  • e-commerce
  • convenience
  • range of options
  • mobile payment systems
  • transactions
  • challenges
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