It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural areas, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

There were earlier days when reaching remote locations
such
as the
himalayas
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and the South poles were considered
as
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unaccessible
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However
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with the help of technological advancement,
this
is now possible and now many
scientists
and tourists are travelling to remote places.
This
essay discusses the advantage of
this
type of travelling and explains how
this
is positively contributing to the world. When we think about the drawbacks, remote
areas
which were not accessed by human does not have any type of pollution or waste disposal.
However
ever since Humans started accessing these places, waste disposal has been identified.
For Instance
, Survey conducted by the Indian Environment Preservation Board revealed that in the year 2019, 1000 kilograms of plastic waste has been collected from the Himalayan mountains,
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experts
also
have pointed out that the increase of pollution in these remote
areas
have been increased compared to the earlier days.
However
,
on the other hand
, the expedition of
scientists
to these natural
areas
helped them to reveal many unknown stories about the Earth and its evolution.
for instance
, Research conducted in the artic and the antarctic region helped
scientists
to know the fact of some extinct species. They discovered many skeletons of some species which was not known earlier,
Likewise
some other research conducted in Siberian remote locations helped
scientists
to discover the massive natural reserve lying in that region. Countries like the US and Russia are using the south pole region for their space research. To conclude, Humans accessing remote natural locations have some disadvantages. Humans need to take action not to disturb the ecosystem of these
areas
while accessing them. At the same time, there are many advantages which help researchers are
scientists
contribute to the field of science, technology and energy which overweigh the disadvantages.
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