Deforestation has been in increasing problem over the last few decades. What are the primary causes of deforestation? How we can solve the problem?

Over the
last
few years clearing of
forests
has been a rising problem.
This
essay will analyze the causes of deforestation like conversion to cropland and pasture and forest fires and offer solutions
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reforestation and reducing beef consumption.
Firstly
, each year, fires burn thousands of hectares of
forests
in the world. The most vulnerable
forests
for fire are heavily logged rainforests,
forests
where forest fires have been suppressed for years allowing unnatural accumulation of vegetation it allows the fire to burn more effectively.
Secondly
, conversion to cropland and pasture, primarily for subsistence purposes,
such
as cropping or animal husbandry to meet daily needs.
For example
, countries are building roads in remote regions to improve the ground movement of goods. The
first
solution to clearing the
forests
is reducing meat. People can
also
make a difference by eating less meat. A 2022 study found that a 20 per cent reduction in global consumption of beef could halve deforestation rates. Reducing all meat consumption would yield better results, as
this
would reduce the demand for soy. Soy is grown, often on cleared land, in the global south to feed livestock in the global north. The
second
solution is reforestation: land skinned of tree cover for urban settlements should be urged to plant
trees
in the vicinity and replace the cut
trees
.
Also
, the cutting must be replaced by planting young
trees
to replace the older ones that were cut. To conclude, deforestation is an important problem that needs
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immediate solution. If we continue ignoring
this
question our planet will have no
trees
left.
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