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Band 7.5

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently stayed at a hotel during a business trip. After returning home, you realize that you left a personal item in your room. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter: Describe the item you left behind Explain where you think the item might be Suggest how the hotel can return the item to you Write at least 150 words

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Dear Manager, I am writing
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 letter to inform you about that. I left my personal thing at your hotel when I visited almost one week ago I stayed in the hotel room number 816. The belonging which I forgot was my watch which was gifted by my late father on my birthday. It was a rose gold watch with
diamond
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a diamond
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 on it and the brand was Michael Kors. I believe that I might have kept my watch near the table, which was closer to the window. And, I recall that
while
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 enjoying the false, I kept the watch aside and the fear of losing it.
However
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, when I was packing the stuff I forgot to pick that up from the table which was left behind.
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, could you please check in the all in the room, especially underneath the table? That watch at valuable in my life as it was gifted by my father. So, if you could find it and return it to me, I would highly appreciate your response and efforts. I am writing all my information below, so it will be easy for you to contact me. Thank you for your consideration Yours faithfully Nishi Prajapati

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suitable writing tone
Try to maintain a consistent tone throughout the letter. Be polite and formal, considering the audience is a hotel manager.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure your paragraphs are unified around a single idea to improve clarity and coherence.
logical structure
Check the text for grammatical errors and sentence structure, such as "while enjoying the false" which seems incorrect in context.
task achievement
The letter effectively describes the item in detail, helping the reader to visualize it clearly.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite, fitting for a formal letter.
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