Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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contemporary era, the development of new technologies, and

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grown stunningly. Due to

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fact children have become more settled down rather than having physical activities. The misuse of new

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as computers and

smartphones

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become a worrying case

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parents are facing nowadays. In

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reading, I will negotiate the negative effects which I think outweigh the positive points of the issue.

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of all, there is no doubt that using new

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is unavoidable,

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, using

smartphones

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, especially by youngsters for a long period of

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certainly causes some major problems for their health.

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, recent research showed that the more hours students use their phones the more reduction in their eyesight and their concentration is sensible, and the cause of

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is the long

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they stare at their phone display without noticing the

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passed.

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, pupils use their

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for almost all their daily chores and

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lead to diseases

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as mental problems, behaviour anomalies and physical asthenia. If the hours of using

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children are not controlled by their parents, they would not realize how much

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has passed since they used their facilities, because of the user-friendly interfaces and the entertaining environment those

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have.

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,

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will lead to problems like obesity which might be the main reason for lateral sicknesses in future.

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, one of my cousins who is only 13 years old suffers from a high volume of bad fat in his body, because of a long

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spent at home doing all his chores online, even his school courses which are held on the internet platform due to the recent Covid19 pandemic. To sum up,

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some positive points can be argued while new technologies help us to do our work in a more convenient way, on the other side, the negative effect of a long

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uses of

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devices

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like

smartphones

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by the young generation shall be considered as a serious subject. Putting a limitation on working hours may be the best way to decrease the negative points of

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development.