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Some feel that individuals should try to assimilate completely to the country where they live while others feel it is more important to preserve their native culture. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

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In recent times, some people migrate from their hometowns to other countries in search of jobs or educational subjects. Their lifestyle can somehow be changed during
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 process.While there may exist some new traditions and cultures in the destination
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 or town,yet,some individuals contend that they should preserve their civilizations. In the following essay, I would argue both perspectives as well as give my sincere viewpoint. As far as I know,it is an indisputable fact that various countries and even
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 towns vary greatly in terms of language, customs,culture and religion.Assigning the approach in which, mankind turns to a new dweller who gives respect to the principles of the adapted
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 is favourable to
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 countries as France.For reaching
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 goal, France has applied a number of unethical laws . A salient instant of them is about “hijab matter”. In France, the hijab is banned as well as other religious symbols- like Jewish hat and Christian cross- by the French government.
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 has forbidden any official work jobs like schoolmistress or bus drivers and all office workers for whose use (
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) hijab,there are still some local Fellows who stand beside Muslims ,Jewish and Christians against
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 amoral law. Little wonder, there held a number of demonstrations and campaigns for the sake of
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 issue. In stark contrast, there are Iranian families for
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instant. Several Iranians and especially previous generations- chief among them,grand parents-are firmly convinced that her/his grandson and granddaughter who migrate abroad, for the sake of high education, should take care of their culture and wear traditional clothes. By way of conclusion, I certainly argue that accepting or rejecting the custom or culture of a new
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 should be optional for each newcomer to what extent they respect to laws and norms of the
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 they live in as well as keeping their moral values like religious matters.
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