In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is often said that there should be huge funding for the construction of new railway lines for having high-speed
trains
all over the cities. Use synonyms
On the contrary
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people
believe that Use synonyms
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money
has to be spent in terms of the development of current public Use synonyms
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money
in the available public Use synonyms
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could be more reasonable, and in the following essay, both views are about to be debated as well.
On the one hand, huge investments in establishing new railway lines could have various advantages. Use synonyms
Firstly
, by the establishment of these railways, Linking Words
people
could be fortunate enough to commute to work or home by high-speed Use synonyms
trains
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As a result
, less time would be spent on travelling between places which is an exquisite advantage compared to regular public Linking Words
transport
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Secondly
, it could result in a remarkable reduction in the volume of traffic. Linking Words
Moreover
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this
means less pollution in the air and emission gasses which would have a positive impact on these countries' environment. Linking Words
For instance
, Japan established the fastest train called the "bullet train" in Tokyo in 2010. Linking Words
Consequently
, the city become less crowded and healthier since Linking Words
people
tended to travel by insanely fast train.
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On the other hand
, it is more realistic to spend that Linking Words
money
on the current public Use synonyms
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. The reason is that many Use synonyms
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have adapted to Use synonyms
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transportation system, and it would be more convenient for them to help make their conditions better by purchasing Linking Words
money
in Use synonyms
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the US has developed many accelerated Linking Words
trains
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according to national investigations. Another reason is that, by improving the available public Linking Words
transport
, the countries' public transportation system would be developed much faster since not only less time would be spent on building structures but Use synonyms
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the improvement procedure would be accelerated as a consequence. Linking Words
Therefore
, it is reasonable enough to put investments in Linking Words
this
area.
In conclusion, it is often argued that large funding has to be contributed to the establishment of new railway lines for having fast Linking Words
trains
or if it is better to spend Use synonyms
money
on the development of current public Use synonyms
transport
. It seems that it is wiser to spend Use synonyms
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money
on the available public Use synonyms
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people
still prefer them. Use synonyms
Also
, it is a quicker way to improve the state of current Linking Words
transport
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