Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Opinions differ on whether or not the

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of sports

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has a correlation with the improvement of public

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. While some

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think that it is the best way for making a healthy Society, orders think its effect is insignificant. I personally believe that increasing the

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of sports

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is not enough and other measures are required. On the one hand, since the majority of

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do not spend enough time

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exercising, the chances of having diseases or going over time.

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is why some

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say if enough

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were accessible for everybody, the

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of

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who do physical activities on a regular basis would increase.

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, they will have

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improved general

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.

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, if the majority of a country's population give the chance to exercise more, the public

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of the country we eventually become better over time.

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, there are many more reasons why a society might have

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poor public

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. Many of these reasons are not because of

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of physical activity.

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of all,

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in many countries have unhealthy habits that put their

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risk.

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, unbalanced diets, smoking, and drinking alcohol. These habits are very common and lead to poor public

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. In order to improve the situation, other measures need to be taken.

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, increasing the

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of

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does not necessarily lead to more physical activity.

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is why the most important action that helps to improve

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health

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of

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is informing them about the dangers of bad habits and making them realize how exercise benefits their

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. In conclusion, while increasing the

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of sports

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can be a good way of improving public

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, it is not the best way and more actions must be taken for

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purpose.