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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Opinions differ on whether or not the
number
 of sports
facilities
 has a correlation with the improvement of public
health
. While some
people
 think that it is the best way for making a healthy Society, orders think its effect is insignificant. I personally believe that increasing the
number
 of sports
facilities
 is not enough and other measures are required. On the one hand, since the majority of
people
 do not spend enough time
for
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exercising, the chances of having diseases or going over time.
This
 is why some
people
 say if enough
facilities
 were accessible for everybody, the
number
 of
people
 who do physical activities on a regular basis would increase.
Subsequently
, they will have
an
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improved general
health
.
Therefore
, if the majority of a country's population give the chance to exercise more, the public
health
 of the country we eventually become better over time.
On the other hand
, there are many more reasons why a society might have
a
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poor public
health
. Many of these reasons are not because of
lack
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 of physical activity.
First
 of all,
people
 in many countries have unhealthy habits that put their
health
in
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 risk.
For example
,
for example
, unbalanced diets, smoking, and drinking alcohol. These habits are very common and lead to poor public
health
. In order to improve the situation, other measures need to be taken.
Moreover
, increasing the
number
 of
facilities
 does not necessarily lead to more physical activity.
This
 is why the most important action that helps to improve
general
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health
 of
people
 is informing them about the dangers of bad habits and making them realize how exercise benefits their
health
. In conclusion, while increasing the
number
 of sports
facilities
 can be a good way of improving public
health
, it is not the best way and more actions must be taken for
this
 purpose.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • sports facilities
  • physical activity
  • exercise
  • chronic diseases
  • heart disease
  • obesity
  • inclusivity
  • participation
  • safe environment
  • social interaction
  • community engagement
  • comprehensive approach
  • health education programs
  • environmental factors
  • healthcare infrastructure
  • quality healthcare services
  • public health initiatives
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