In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In the modern world, buying or renting a

house

is a well-discussed topic, and it is imperative for some individuals to have their own

home

across from the rented

house

.

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essay will explain two causes of

this

and

deliberating

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the situation as

a

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positive or negative. Nowadays, citizens prefer to live in their

home

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homes

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as

a

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apply

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landlady or

landlord

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landlords

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. One of the major

fact

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of

this

would be financial pressures

such

as swelling.

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, always the price of houses

are

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is

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rising in Iran due to the

swelling

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, and people have been

persuade

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to

owning

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a

home

rather than

renting

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one.

Moreover

, if they rented a

house

instead

of buying , they would bear the burden to overcome the living costs

especially

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,especially

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renting

house

price

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prices

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which

affected

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and changed by swelling. The other cause would be amenities and facilities. Individuals think if had their own

house

, they would have more options and independence

such

as changing

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of their

home

and many architecting

process

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processes

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.

As a result

, citizens think owning a

home

is very imperative nowadays.

Furthermore

, it seems that discussed subject is a superb positive situation because when you have your own

home

, can do any activities without needing

others

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confirm

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. An example can be seen

as

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painting

the

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a

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house

.

In addition

, if you had ownership, would have less stress

for

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about

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rising the

rents

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rent

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prices. Possibly, there are some disadvantages

of

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to

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this

fact.

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, owners of houses are under pressure of heavy

tax

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taxes

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in some countries

such

as the USA. American people tend to live in rented apartments because of

high

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the high

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ranges of

tax

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. But in my opinion, due to

reasons

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the reasons

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which

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apply

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discussed there are more options

in

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for

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owning a

home

. To conclude, in some areas, individuals

concerned

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are concerned

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about housing needs, and it is imperative for them to have their own

home

instead

of renting based on important facts and it seems

that is

a great idea and

positive

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a positive

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situation.