Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own op

There has been a significant divergence of opinion revolving around whether schooling on computers

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positive trends.

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, some people argue that they are leading to negative outcomes.

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, I firmly support the previous notion.

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essay will examine both sides. On the one hand, educating

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with a help of electronic devices may cause a multitude of negative consequences.

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, studying

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electrical gadgets may adversely

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the health of

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. Namely, poor eyesight, rachiocampsis and

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lack of physical activities.

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, while

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are getting

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through computers, they isolate from the real world.

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, there are children who already spend a lot of time on their phones and laptops, playing games and streaming videos on

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YouTube or Netflix. And if

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kind of youngsters will even

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with computers, the ability to communicate with the outside may turn into

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challenge for them. On the other side, nowadays laptops and

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other devices are gaining popularity and becoming obliging and actual. Teaching, tutoring and educating with gadgets helped to solve a multitude of global problems.

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, educating online was helpful during

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Covid-19, when people were not able to even go outside.

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, all the information that

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are always at hand, it takes less time to search and find some particulars and data

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the internet. In conclusion, despite the fact that online education

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positive

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tendency, people’s health and social skills are more significant.

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offline and in real life develop

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students

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social and soft skills.