Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Education is the fundamental
rights
of everyone. While some people argue that should be Fix the agreement mistake
right
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accessible
accesible
and available for every student, regardless of their financial statement. In my perspective, Correct your spelling
accessible
i
strongly believe Change the capitalization
I
this
idea for several reasons.
On the one hand,if government pay all educational fees then
it will help to minimize human disparity as well as improve their well-being. First
of all,irrespective of being into a rich or poor family everyone gets same
benefits Correct article usage
the same
such
as knowledge and skills in universities. For example
, in the Netherlands,all students are educated as
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with
the
government support including tuition fees, books and so on.Correct article usage
apply
Secondly
, educated students can work for high paid jobs resulting in a better livelihood. Without financial effort,their future depends on their true dedication.
On the other hand
,educating the youth is beneficial for any nation to developing
a country.Change the form of the verb
develop
For instance
, Singapore is smaller than Thailand, But their finance and GDP is
larger than Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Thailand
.As,Singapore emphasize Change noun form
Thailand's
to
educating Change preposition
apply
their
citizens, and Correct pronoun usage
its
their
citizens apply their knowledge to build their infrastructure.Nowadays, Educated nations are more advanced in the field of IT as well as they dominate the whole World. Correct pronoun usage
its
As a result
, China has already apply
their knowledge in the sector of IT, Change the verb form
applied
engineering
, and they Correct word choice
and engineering
able
to make anything with the help of technology. Without Add a missing verb
are able
education
they could not do that.
To sum up,education is a very important factor to reduce social disparity, improve Add a comma
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well being
and Add a hyphen
well-being
develop
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developing
nation
. In my opinion, Add an article
the nation
a nation
i
truly agree that the government should make it free of cost for everyone to achieve the benefits.Change the capitalization
I
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