You recently went on holiday and your friend lent you a travel guidebook. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend about the holiday explain how the guidebook was helpful say when and how you will return the guidebook

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Dear Ash, I hope you are doing great my friend. I'm writing

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letter in connection with how your travel guidebook was useful throughout my holiday.

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of all, my vacation was fantastic. I was mesmerized by the beauty of Banff and lake Louise. The people were really friendly and I

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did ziplining near lake Louise. The gondola to the Rockies was a breathtaking view.

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of all, your guidebook was my saviour.I was able to keep up with all spots as

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book had all the information that I had to know, and

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helped to skip cues as it had a QR code that allowed me to grab tickets online. It

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had information on numerous bus routes and the timing allotted for each location. At

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, I'm planning to visit you on Friday past 7 and I will return your belongings we I visit you. Looking forward to hearing from you . Yours faithfully, aL

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

159 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Gratitude
Breathtaking
Insights
Invaluable
Local cuisine
Navigating
Off-the-beaten-path
Anecdotes
Well-preserved
Reconnect
Safeguarded
Courier
Itinerary
Landmarks
Cultural gems

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The Closing

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