Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained in popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be taken as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, online learning systems have become more common. Some people think that
distance
learning will never be as great as
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face
learning in tertiary institutions. I agree with
this
statement due to
cost - effectiveness
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and
time saving
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for
distance
learning.
Firstly
,
time - saving
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is the main
benefits
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of electronic learning.
This
is because teachers and
students
can be connected
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online using Microsoft Teams and Zoom applications. Both
students
and teachers do not need to travel to campus every day for
classes
or lectures. They can just rely on a strong Internet connection and attend
classes
every day.
For example
, a mother of two can attend online
classes
on
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. She can still
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to work on
weekday
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.
Secondly
,
cost - effectiveness
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is the
second
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of
distance
learning. A
face
to
face
learning is much more expensive than online courses.
Also
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on campus
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education
needs to have a limited number of
students
in the class and campus facilities for
students
.
Thus
, all of these factors will be included in the tuition fees for physical
classes
.
For example
, an English course in British Council Malaysia costs around RM500 for
distance
learning and RM1600 for physical
classes
. Both fees are charged for 3 weeks
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only which
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a much big difference for
two
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different modes of learning. In conclusion, cheaper tuition fees and
time saving
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are two primary reasons
on
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why
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education
has become more common today. In my opinion, both modes of learning are the same as long as a student is interested and motivated to excel in
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. Any mode of learning would not be affected by the quality of
education
delivered to
students
in tertiary
education
.
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