Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In my opinion, there are several reasons for
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spend lots of Correct pronoun usage
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time
every Use synonyms
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on their Use synonyms
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spending
time
on Use synonyms
smartphones
is a negative development.
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children
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spend
hours
every Use synonyms
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on their Use synonyms
smartphones
because Use synonyms
smartphones
are becoming one of the most important tools for Use synonyms
children
to communicate. Nowadays, Use synonyms
smartphones
are becoming more and more popular and nearly everyone has at least one smartphone, including kids. Since some Use synonyms
children
are shy to communicate with others face to face, they choose to use their Use synonyms
cellphones
to talk to their friends or strangers that they meet on the internet. In Correct your spelling
cell phones
this
way, Linking Words
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only need to open their social Use synonyms
medias
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media
such
as WeChat, a Twitter-like social media to communicate with others, and it is very convenient.
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are attractive to some Correct your spelling
cell phones
children
, they spend a lot of Use synonyms
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. Today's Correct your spelling
cell phones
smartphones
have more and more functions, to be specific, people can not only use Use synonyms
smartphones
to talk but Use synonyms
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play games and watch movies, and all these Linking Words
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functions
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to many Correct your spelling
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children
. In Use synonyms
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case, some Linking Words
children
are addicted to mobile games and spend a number of Use synonyms
time
playing games on their Use synonyms
smartphones
.
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, spending too much Use synonyms
time
on their Use synonyms
smartphones
is a negative development. On the one hand, spending Use synonyms
hours
every Use synonyms
day
on Use synonyms
smartphones
are harmful Use synonyms
for
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to
children
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the screens
are
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is
eyes'
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On the other hand
, spending Linking Words
hours
every Use synonyms
day
on Use synonyms
smartphones
are harmful Use synonyms
for
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to
children
's mental health. They may Use synonyms
addicted
to the internet world and not willing to talk in the Change the verb form
be addicted
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world. There Replace the word
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are
some unhealthy information online, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
such
as sex and violence, if Linking Words
children
read them, they may follow the unhealthy information and try them in the real world, which may cause crime.
To conclude, the increasing functions of Use synonyms
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and Use synonyms
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important reasons. Spending Correct article usage
apply
hours
every Use synonyms
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on Use synonyms
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are very bad for Use synonyms
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