Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In the modern world, advertising is a well-discussed topic. some
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think that advertising has influencing
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people
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to buy products
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others believe that
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would ignore advertising not
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by that.
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essay will discuss these views based on facts and my opinion on
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. On the one hand,
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some
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there are various platforms for advertising and it would
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people
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seriously to buy gadgets. An example can be seen as social
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which have easy accessibility for citizens. Nowadays
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spent much time on the internet and
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so if they opened platforms, they would be influenced by many superb advertisements.
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, citizens pay
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on
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promotions
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due to
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consumerism. They prefer
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new gadgets without needed.
As a result
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, advertising has significant effects on persuading
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to buy products.
On the other hand
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, others think that advertising is usual and
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would ignore it. when
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see repetitive commercials they would not pay
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to them.
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, TV
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influenced
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in
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lowest
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the lowest
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level because they are
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repetitive and could not attract
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. They wait for their
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programs without paying
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to advertisements.
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, based on sciences when a promotion become regular would take less
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such
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as TV commercials or
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on
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boards.
To conclude
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, it seems that there are various advertising platforms which
people
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in touch with them every day. So they would
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effected
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affected
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by
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to buy gadgets without
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. It is observed that advertising is significant
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influencing
people
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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