Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, advertising is a well-discussed topic. some
individuals
think that advertising has influencing
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people
to buy products
while
others believe that
individuals
would ignore advertising not
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by that.
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. On the one hand,
according to
some
people
’s
perspective
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there are various platforms for advertising and it would
affects
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people
seriously to buy gadgets. An example can be seen as social
medias
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which have easy accessibility for citizens. Nowadays
people
spent much time on the internet and
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so if they opened platforms, they would be influenced by many superb advertisements.
In addition
, citizens pay
attention
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promotions
due to
consumerism. They prefer
buy
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new gadgets without needed.
As a result
, advertising has significant effects on persuading
people
to buy products.
On the other hand
, others think that advertising is usual and
people
would ignore it. when
individuals
see repetitive commercials they would not pay
attention
to them.
For example
, TV
promotions
influenced
people
in
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lowest
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level because they are
also
repetitive and could not attract
individuals
. They wait for their
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programs without paying
attention
to advertisements.
Moreover
, based on sciences when a promotion become regular would take less
attention
such
as TV commercials or
promotions
on
streets
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boards.
To conclude
, it seems that there are various advertising platforms which
people
in touch with them every day. So they would
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effected
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by
promotions
to buy gadgets without
needed
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. It is observed that advertising is significant
to
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influencing
people
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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