Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the modern world, advertising is a well-discussed topic. some
individuals
think that advertising has influencing on
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people
to buy products while
others believe that individuals
would ignore advertising not affecting
by that. Wrong verb form
affected
This
essay will discuss these views based on facts and my opinion on conclusion
.
On the one hand, Correct article usage
the conclusion
according to
some people
’s perspective
there are various platforms for advertising and it would Add a comma
,perspective
affects
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affect
people
seriously to buy gadgets. An example can be seen as social medias
which have easy accessibility for citizens. Nowadays Correct your spelling
media
people
spent much time on the internet and medias
so if they opened platforms, they would be influenced by many superb advertisements. Correct your spelling
media
In addition
, citizens pay attention
on
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to
promotions
due to
consumerism. They prefer buy
new gadgets without needed. Fix the infinitive
to buy
As a result
, advertising has significant effects on persuading people
to buy products.
On the other hand
, others think that advertising is usual and people
would ignore it. when individuals
see repetitive commercials they would not pay attention
to them. For example
, TV promotions
influenced people
in
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at
lowest
level because they are Correct article usage
the lowest
also
repetitive and could not attract individuals
. They wait for their favorite
programs without paying Change the spelling
favourite
attention
to advertisements. Moreover
, based on sciences when a promotion become regular would take less attention
such
as TV commercials or promotions
on streets
boards.
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street
To conclude
, it seems that there are various advertising platforms which people
in touch with them every day. So they would Change the verb form
be effected
effected
by Correct your spelling
affected
promotions
to buy gadgets without needed
. It is observed that advertising is significant Replace the word
need
to
influencing Change preposition
in
people
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