Some people who have been successful in society don't attribute their success to the theoretical knowledge they learned from their university. Do you agree that theoretical knowledge is not as valuable as expected?

Some people seem to have had successful careers without any experience in
university
education.
This
may be true in some cases, but I do not agree with the notion that the
knowledge
gained from college is of little value to one’s career advancement. By learning basic
theories
students are able to gain an insight into the concepts and principles of their majors, which paves the way for their career success in the future.
This
kind of
knowledge
could not be acquired outside
university
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,
such
as some mechanical
theories
and medical
knowledge
, which would become a bar to promotion for those who lack these.
For instance
, a worker who is trained to just repair an engine is incapable of designing an engine, as he does not know the relevant mechanical
theories
about the impacts of different metals on the functioning of engines or how to save energy, lowering the use of gasoline and improving energy efficiency at the same time.
In addition
, a nurse who does not have relevant medical
knowledge
could not receive a job opportunity as a doctor
from
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hospitals
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. Both of them may end up with manual work during their whole life,
such
as working as a mechanic or caring for patients with mental illness.
However
, people who attend
university
to learn relevant courses would gain a competitive edge over those who do not, which is more likely to help them achieve fame and wealth in the future.
On the other hand
, theoretical
knowledge
should not be overvalued. In some cases, many
theories
have developed based on empirical
knowledge
,
such
as hotel management. In order to achieve success in
this
field, the hotel staff regardless of whether he is a
waiter
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or a manager need to put into practice, rather than
applying
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theories
blindly. In conclusion, theoretical
knowledge
, especially
which
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is gained from
university
, is important for most people who want to gain
an
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insight into their majors or to achieve career success
by
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a tertiary-level qualification,
although
practical experience is more important in some fields.
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