You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,

#party #friend #city #directions #venue #addresses #___

Dear Daniel, How are you doing these days? I know, I haven’t talked to you in a while, but that’s because I have been so busy with my work and other things lately. Anyway, I am writing

this

letter to invite you to attend a

party

. With regard to the

party

, I've decided to throw that

party

on the occasion of moving into a newly-built home. Apparently, we are so happy to be able to

finally

move into our new home, and I want to share our happiness with friends, families and relatives.

That is

why I am throwing

this

party

which will take place on 19th February. The

party

will include a cake-cutting ceremony and a dinner

party

. But, before the dinner is served, a few video clips on how the house was built gradually will

also

be displayed. After dinner, we will enjoy a music concert. Here is the direction of our new house from your town -

first

take the N-35 highway, drive about 2 hours towards the north and reach our city. After that, take right on “Harmony” road and drive about 2 kilometres before you see a large shopping centre named “Valeria”. The house is right behind the shopping centre. I hope to see you at the

party

. Warm wishes, Stefan Hermann

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

217 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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