Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to young children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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high

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education. In my point of view, I totally agree with the thesis since it is essential to apply the

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have gotten during the education process

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to helping others.

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First

and foremost, there is a huge amount of society that

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needy and would appreciate

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support from the young generation.

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of

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type of help it would be. On one hand, if educators helped the destitute persons somehow,

then

social inequality would be balanced slightly.

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the other hand, it would possibly play

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role for

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generation to monitor the actions of the old generation in helping needy ones.

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, primary or secondary

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educators will follow how the high

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disciples are helping poor

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they are confident.

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communication is a key to many problems and takes a crucial role in

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of a modern human.

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participation in

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situation

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would give an important lesson to a student.

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, students will be studying to communicate through leadership,

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through

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teaching.

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is a professional basketball coach. So, the future coach goes

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in the university he

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at to a

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where he had been studying before for a while.

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primary

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students would have a huge impact

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both sides. To conclude,

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knowledge

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others and help

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the

people

who will be grateful for it could build correct habits

in addition

to the character of the nation.