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There are different customs in different countries related to how people eat, dress, and so on. Some think that people visiting a country should behave according to customs of the country they visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Immigration is one of the most intentions of people learning a foreign
language
. It does not matter which country you would like to immigrate to, the fact is that you must know how to communicate and comprehend people in the common
language
 of your destination. . As far as you are concerned,
English
 is the most popular
language
, spreading over every continent . It is the
language
 of international communication, the media and the Internet. Immigrating is a lot easier with a good knowledge of
English
. What would it happen if you could not communicate? There are different ways that you can enhance your skills. Registering at an
English
 institution is a traditional selection.
Language
 learning takes place in a classroom with the students at their desks and the teacher conveys the knowledge to them. The typical model of learning had already changed a great deal. Little did we know that e-learning is a considerable substitution for offline education. Some people like better Online classes. The future of
language
 learning is unpredictable.
Although
 there are many books for learning, it seems that the future of learning
English
 will be affected by factors that are not related to books :podcasts, youtube and
language
 applications.
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