You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend’s house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them

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Dear

Samagna

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Samana

, Hope you and your family are in good spirits and in radiant health. I am extremely sorry for not writing a letter to you for

such

a long time as I have been engaged in my office routine. I really want to thank you ,especially your mother for taking care of me during my 1-week stay

otherwise

I would face a lot of problems.

Initially

, I was afraid to take part in a training course as the city was completely new to me and I have never been there. But, later

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,on

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I got to know that you are staying in that city and

then

I contacted you and you instantly accepted my request. I have completely impressed with the hospitality and care shown by your family. I already started missing you all, particularly the scrumptious dishes cooked by aunty. As the coming weekend is long, I would like to invite you all to my place so that we can enjoy ourselves at my home by reminiscing all our memories. Hope to see you soon. Regards, Joe.

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You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend’s house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them

The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in on European country on different days

Some believe that younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting older family members when they become physically, mentally and financially unable to look after themselves. Do you agree or disagree?

In their advertising businesses now adays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way Why is this ? do you think it is a positive or negative development