You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend’s house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them

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Dear

Samagna

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Samana

, Hope you and your family are in good spirits and in radiant health. I am extremely sorry for not writing a letter to you for

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a long time as I have been engaged in my office routine. I really want to thank you ,especially your mother for taking care of me during my 1-week stay

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I would face a lot of problems.

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, I was afraid to take part in a training course as the city was completely new to me and I have never been there. But, later

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I got to know that you are staying in that city and

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I contacted you and you instantly accepted my request. I have completely impressed with the hospitality and care shown by your family. I already started missing you all, particularly the scrumptious dishes cooked by aunty. As the coming weekend is long, I would like to invite you all to my place so that we can enjoy ourselves at my home by reminiscing all our memories. Hope to see you soon. Regards, Joe.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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179 words

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

Many jobs that are done by people are now done by machines and computers. Some people that this is a positive development while others feel this is a negative for society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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