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Working from home,eome think it is beneficial while some people say it may dustract the family routine.Do you agree or disagree.

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With the shift in paradigm and
people
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 working from
home
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, it is argued by some to be a distraction while some find many advantages in the culture. While it has certain demerits and adjustments, I find it particularly useful especially for
people
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 who belong to other cities and can save money and
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 have personalised flexibility in
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.
This
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 essay will discuss the particular benefits which make working from
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-- a stupendous opportunity.
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, working from
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 has allowed
people
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 who have families in other cities, to live closely and interact daily. It has
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 made it possible to save money
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 spent on rent and running an additional household.
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, I used to operate in Pune, while my family lived in Bhopal. Living away from
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 was quite strenuous mentally and
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 heavy on the pocket as I had to pay monthly rental, which is directly saved and invested
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 now.
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 to having fewer expenses, I spend
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 with my family which has improved my mental well-being.
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, the customised
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 schedule has allowed one to
work
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 when they are most productive and comfortable. Some
people
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work
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 well in the morning while some are at their best in the late evening.
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, a friend of mine called Dave preferred working at night as he had minimum distractions and found it easy to focus and dither less, resulting in higher productivity.
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 would be impossible in the original 9 am to 5pm
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 timings.
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, working from
home
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 has been quite useful for
people
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 like Dave to find their optimal productivity
time
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. In conclusion, while there may be some challenges, working from
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 has largely benefitted a multitude of
people
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 by allowing more family
time
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, reducing expenditure and working at a
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 when they feel best.
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, I hope the corporates continue to operate
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 from
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 in the near future.
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