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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is an idea that said that in the future, nobody tends to expend
money
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 on printed
books
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 or
newspapers
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, since there will be online kind of these publications, which will be available for everyone, without spending
money
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. I believe that
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 the online form of these publications is more convenient and
money
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-saving, but yet there are a large number of
people
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, who prefer to buy
paper
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 style and spend their budget on them. I will explain the reasons in the following essay. Nowadays, modern technologies let us various opportunities to save time and
money
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. One of these opportunities
,
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 refers to
newspapers
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. Compared to the past time, when we had to buy every newspaper that we want, today, we can read them online and we don’t have to pay any
money
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 for them. It happened to
books
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 in a different way. Some writers, put one or two seasons of their
books
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 on the internet, and everyone can download them for free. Maybe in the future, they tend to put the whole of their
books
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 on websites and applications and at that time,
people
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 prefer to read them online, without any expenditure,
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 they can spend their budget on other things.
On the other hand
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, if all the
books
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 will become available on the internet for free, some
people
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 prefer to buy the original
paper
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 type, as we saw that happened to the
newspapers
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 too. Some
people
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 don’t like to read
books
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 and
newspapers
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 online. Because they have some problems reading them on digital screens and It doesn’t matter whether it’s a smartphone, laptop or even Kindle. In some cases, they have some difficulties considering the screens, or some older
people
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, have some problems finding their wanted book on the internet or even learning the way to read
books
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 on their gadgets. Some
people
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 even have a funny excuse for spending
money
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 on
paper
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 types of
books
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 and
newspapers
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: they say that they like the smell of
paper
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! In conclusion,
although
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 the online forms of
newspapers
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 and
books
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 are more convenient than printed ones and maybe in the future all of them become totally free, I believe that even with
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money
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-saving form of publications, some
people
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, like elders, tend to buy printed type, due to the complexity of new technology.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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