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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Life
 is a long journey with ups and down, and
people
 suffer a lot of difficult
situations
 along the way. While some
people
 accept the tormenting
situations
 and consider it as an undeniable fate, others work hard to get hem self out of unsatisfactory
situations
, using their intuition and planning. I think that not settling with unacceptable
situations
 and working aggressively towards crossing hurdles in your
life
 will lead to personal growth and financial freedom in a long run. Some
people
 do not usually have any idea of how to deal with bad
situations
 and consider those
events
 in their
life
 as a destiny.
For instance
, in terms of financial crises, they just sit back do not get involved in any type of struggle and think that the problems will eventually go away. But those individuals don’t know the implications of that
kind
 of attitude.
This
 type of behaviour will lead to demotivation which ultimately sequesters the chance of making your
life
 any better from a financial perspective. Lack of willingness in any individual from getting out of any negative
events
 in their
life
 will lead that individual to have anxiety attacks, trauma, and health problems.
On the other hand
, there are
people
 who look forward in their
life
,
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 and do their due diligence, planning of getting out of
this
kind
 of circumstance.
Although
,
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 there may be a time of pain and agonising, they stay motivated to uplift their financial positioning and continuously get indulge in finding alternative means of getting their
life
 back on a satisfactory track.
Thus
, having
this
kind
 of approach to the negative locus in
life
 will eventually create a strong person with experience to deal with any unforeseen hurdle in
life
. To conclude, in my ,opinion there is no better solution than working hard in especially that
kind
 of
life
 event. Those
events
 will eventually give you strength and
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 that you have the ability and self-awareness of countering stressful and impactful
events
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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