Some people believe that children have the freedom to make mistakes, while others argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Mistakes

are

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integral part of human life. Even,

practice

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of

mistakes

is most common among

kids

.

However

, the

freedom

of making

mistakes

among

children

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always been a question of debate. Some believe that

,

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kids

having

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their own

freedom

to do

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things,

others

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think

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should have control over them.

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upcoming paragraph, I shall discuss both of these views precisely to obtain a path forward

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this

subject.

To begin

with, like others

children

also

should have the

freedom

to do

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mistakes

.

This

helps them to find their faults

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own and

therefore

they won’t repeat them

in

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next

time.

For example

, if a boy

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a cup wrongly, may

leads

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to

brockage

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blockage

of the same. From

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incident

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, the boy understands how to avoid

such

situation

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.

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is one small example,

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we can point out several from our routine life.

On the other hand

, some believe that each activity of

children

should be monitored by old people to make them error

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human

being

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.

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, most

of

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the

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kids

follows

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wrong Food habits and food hygiene. If the elder one is not monitoring and controlling enough,

kids

may end up in

an

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unhealthy

condition

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. In my opinion,

children

to be free on doing wrong things. In conclusion, irrespective of the

disadvantages

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view on

kids

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freedom

of doing wrong, they over weighed due to the intellectual capability

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of

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kids

during

this

process.

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first

look one feels the intervention

elder

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in

children

’s activities is important,

however

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long-term impact is not correct. So, let

kids

fly

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own.