The Internet has made our lives easier or more difficult. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

First
of all, what’s the
internet
? The
Internet
is a global informatic web
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use
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the
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telephonic
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transmitting
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transmitting
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i
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can say that the
internet
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made
society
better because it
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us to search much
information
that is
very useful and with
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we can discover too
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things. The
internet
made
society
better that’s a fact but
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the other
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are the problems that
people
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the
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information
for example
some
people
use
this
information
web
for
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search illegal things in order to commit crimes and harm innocent
people
but as I said
that is
the other face of
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.
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the
Internet
offer
to
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us too much
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entertainment
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offer
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us science, botanic and many,
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other
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the
internet
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society
better despite many
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the contrary but
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sure that the
internet
made an upgrade to our
society
and change in a good way.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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