Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays environmental

problems

are

considering

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one of the most important issues. Many people believe that the main environmental problem is the loss of specific

species

of

plants

and

animals

.

However

, others say that there are other environmental issues which are more important. I strongly agree with the

first

notion and my opinion will be discussed in

further

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paragraph. I firmly believe that the main environmental problem these days is the loss of some

species

of

plants

and

animals

. As our nature

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on the chain reaction rule within which one petty failure in a remote corner of the

world

can have

adverse

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effect

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effects

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on all the creatures all around the

world

.

Corona virus

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Coronavirus

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pandemic is a typical example to illustrate the point. To sum up if a particular

species

of

plants

or

animals

extinct

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, the

world

would face serious

problems

like inflation,

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devastation

harvastation

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and harvastation

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to name but a few.

This

refers to the cycle of the

world

. To cite an example consider one specific plant which is the main food of an animal and the so-called animal which is the food for another wild animal. In

this

period extinction of a specific

species

of

plants

can pose a real threat to the main source of food for other

animals

.

However

, there are other important environmental

problems

that should be taken into account. On

its

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contrasting side, people who held another

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viewpoint

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view point

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say that there are more important environmental

problems

. They believe that other environmental issues like greenhouse effects and global warming are of greater importance. Had not taken immediate

actions

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to

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so-called environmental

problems

, our

world

would no longer be a place to live. In conclusion, I would like to say that, the extinction of particular

species

of

plants

and

animals

are the main environmental

problems

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these day

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.

However

, there are other important

problems

that have to be considered.