Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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, in the modern era, some Linking Words
people
believe that dependency between Use synonyms
people
has increased, whereas Use synonyms
others
believe that Use synonyms
people
have grown to be more independent.
One reason that Use synonyms
people
think we are more dependent on each other is because of our reliance on Use synonyms
others
to provide a positive image of ourselves. Use synonyms
People
are bombarded these days with pictures of beautiful models and Use synonyms
people
who seem to have perfect Use synonyms
lives
. Many Use synonyms
people
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, therefore,
therefore
feel the need to go on social media, Linking Words
such
as Facebook and Instagram, in order to post pictures and they need Linking Words
others
to get as many ‘likes’ as possible. Use synonyms
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, because of the hectic and busy Linking Words
lives
some families lead, it is argued they are dependent on Use synonyms
others
to support them, Use synonyms
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grandparents helping to take care of their grandchildren because the parents don't have time.
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However
, despite Linking Words
this
, overall I believe that Linking Words
people
are generally more independent. Use synonyms
This
can be seen in the way that so many Linking Words
people
live away from their families and lead their own Use synonyms
lives
. Use synonyms
For example
, families used to live nearby to each other, but nowadays Linking Words
people
often reside in different cities Use synonyms
to
their parents and siblings or in other countries, seeing each other only rarely in some cases. Not only Change preposition
from
this
, Linking Words
people
prefer more privacy than in the past and do not require help from Use synonyms
others
, seen in the way that neighbours these days often do not know each other or interact at all.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
in certain ways Linking Words
people
are more dependent, it is generally the case that Use synonyms
people
now live more independent Use synonyms
lives
. Only over time will it be revealed Use synonyms
as to
whether Change preposition
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this
is a positive or negative development for society.Linking Words
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