Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest?

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I am going to discuss the effects of smoking and how to solve

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financial status.

Firstly

, cigarettes contain toxic materials that impact negatively on the body, in ,

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the rate incident of sudden death among young people is strongly associated with the presence of nicotine in the body.

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, when they smoke release toxic materials into the air, which lead to pollution and impact negatively non-smokers.

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, these habits and addiction to buying cigarettes daily base

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money.

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, smoking is a worse habit that could destroy their lung, money and our environment. ,No one can deny the fact of

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negative impacts of smoking,

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, what is the appropriate measure that could assess to solve

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Governments should

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on several regulations

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as raising prices and limiting places

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smoking.

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, some people when they find the prices increase may it will help them to stop buying it. Limited places that allowed smoking

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could be the solution.

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, prohibited smoking in public areas and closed restaurants and any places that have children inside them.

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, increasing awareness about the risk of smoking as research evidence could be the best method to stop smoking habits. To be more specific, a person who

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consequences will help to rethink

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certain behaviour. In conclusion, it is evident that smoking brings sickness and poor to smokers. Government ensure steps are taken to prevent

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from deteriorating future.