Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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We are living in a world
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study
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abroad is
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more and more prevalent.
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, there
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many controversial arguments surrounding
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living in a foreign country where we can not speak our mother
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tongue
tounge
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tongue
. While some people said it may
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out some social
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issues
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such
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as practical problems. On the one hand. Studying abroad or being a denizen could make us face with
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language
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the language
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barrier. It is hard to communicate when we move to
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a new
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place. Especially
foreign
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in foreign
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country
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countries
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, multilingual communication could lead us to
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a misunderstanding
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misunderstanding
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about
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study
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and daily life.
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.
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of
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conflict, we may suffer the scene of isolation and
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inferiority
when contacting
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people. The
language
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barrier might make it difficult for us to engage in activities as a way to fitting back
society
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. Not only the difference in
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but
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in culture. Living in
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multicultural
neighborhood
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also
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lead to
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problem.
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,
the
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discrimination
descrimination
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discrimination
on the ground of race and culture
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inevitable. Overall, I strongly agree with the opinion that living in a country where we have to speak another
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tongue
tounge
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tongue
could be
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the reason
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for some social and practical problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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