Some argue younger people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while others think this is a good idea. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Young generations have played a really important role in our modern life. Yet when it comes to whether younger
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are suitable for important work in
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some
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hold conflicting views. Someone believes that young
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are able to deal with important
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issues,
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, others assert that they are too young to have
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occupation in
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important positions.
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essay discusses these two arguments, and I will give my own perspective on which young
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are suitable for
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important jobs. Granted, someone thinks that young
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who are so young that lacking enough experience when facing difficult and important
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problems, so they could not give a proper solution and cope with political problems. The important positions of
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contain more duties and heavier responsibilities than young
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thought and a wrong policy may have a really bad influence on many
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and many social aspects. I think that they are ignoring the ages so I can not agree with them.
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, as for the young man who has more energy and creativity than the
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older than them, they can put more attention
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the political stuff and think
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of the boxes which are made by the old generations, Which would make society more energetic and positive.
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, Young
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know much about
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new age Dealing with issues in new internet and AI ways can improve society's development more rapidly.
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but not least, young
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have stronger learning skills and potential than old
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, so they will make the
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energetic and full of potential like they are. In conclusion, I concede that if the significant position of
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contains none of the young
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will generate more downsides. On balance, I am convinced that
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should let some young generations do some leadership jobs and vital work.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • far-reaching consequences
  • life and professional experience
  • judicious policymaking
  • fresh perspectives
  • stagnant systems
  • progressive and inclusive policies
  • political acumen
  • ineffective governance
  • demographic
  • long-term planning
  • authoritative presence
  • manipulation
  • seasoned politicians
  • adaptable
  • open-minded
  • flexibility in problem-solving
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