Art is essential part of all cultures throughout the world however in these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus on science technology and business. What is your opinion?

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the identity of a nation, which helps us better understand the world around us. Nowadays, only

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people show interest in the arts,

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is mainly because of technological improvement. But, once it was regarded as the fundamental aspect of life which makes us focus on science, technology and business. In my opinion, people have to prioritize their time for traditions, in order to prevent them from getting extinct.

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individuals should understand the importance of customs. They should learn and explore the various lifestyles which

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them a better person and

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to communicate with other

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.

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, students will not recognize the importance just by telling the significance of culture, they have to feel on their own. For that, they need some fundamental knowledge.

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, basic training is a key factor in civilization.

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the curriculum of the schools. By learning at

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age makes a profound individual.

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, equal attention should be given to both science and fashion,

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of the children.

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a part of their learning will have

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impact on

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society. In conclusion, it helps to understand unity in diversity. Priority should be given to prevent

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fading away. Despite

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our hectic schedule, we should find time to preserve our traditions and convey the message to our successors.