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Some people think governments should spend money on saving languages with fewer speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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With the development of multinational communication and big data, some of the major
languages
 are being utilized more frequently whilst an increasing number of minority
languages
 are being marginalized by the major ones. Under
such
circumstance
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, the topic concerning whether the authorities ought to invest funds to preserve or not has been discussed widely. Understandably, it is evident that spending money on saving endangered
languages
instead
 of other fields concerning science, technology, commercial or even art is of significant waste since everybody
know
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 the fact that the latter ones are more beneficial to our community. But what those
languages
 bring and mean to us is not just on the material level but the inner world, or you could say it is a kind of our treasure hiding in our
human’s
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 history. So, in terms of the opposite aspect, the real function of those authorities’ finance is to make their people happier and richer. Losing
personality
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the personality
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 of a country’s image or even
essence
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the essence
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 of the core culture, their
languages
, might not be a delightful event for their people. In another word, the diversity of the
languages
 must be the best way to show our
human’s
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 prosperity and charm,
that is
also
 why we should maintain and treasure our traditions as well as those old-fashioned and less-used but meaningful
languages
. Based on the mentioned discussions, I personally tend to side with the latter stance. Albeit there are some other fields
which
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 governments and the residents are willing to fund to enhance the strength and quality, the maintenance of the minority
languages
also
play
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 a critical role in our reality.
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