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When people learn a foreign language, all four skills (listening, speaking, reading and writing) are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Language is a key to communication. Some
people
 think that it is very important to learn all the skills of English including reading, writing, speaking and listening but others opposed that by saying basic English is necessary. I agree with the former point of view and will state my points in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, knowledge of four skills is very important when
people
 are visiting other countries.
This
 will
further
 help them to communicate well and read properly.
For example
, in the airport, if someone is hungry and wants to get food
then
 he or she can read the menu and speak to the workers to get food.
Secondly
, it
also
 helps
people
 to get better jobs because most good companies need bilingual
people
 who can read, write, listen and speak in the other language.
For example
, Air Canada is a big company and they give preference to those candidates
first
 who
is
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 fluent in French.
Also
, if a
person
 is good at speaking but not at reading
then
 he or she took more time than a normal
person
 to understand and read . And, same will happen if one knows only reading but not speaking . It will be very hard for him or her to explain to another
person
about
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his concerns.
Moreover
, if one knows other languages well rather than one mother tongue it can open up the ways for a
person
 to earn money. He or she can start
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a
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youtube channel to teach other
people
. To sum up, it is important for a
person
 to get the proper training in a
second
 language to survive in the competitive world.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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