Teenagers should have regular exams at secondary schools as this will prepare them better for life after leaving school. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

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exams
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challenges
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without any hesitation.I would argue adolescents need to be examined
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primary schools
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schedule their
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most of the students have their own
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their brains and minds getting active than the others.Because pupils have to do their studies day by day to
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and to reach their target score .The teenagers who
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their
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how to target their achievements accurately.
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,students are well practised to focus
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goals.
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on some information got from
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society the most of the people who achieved their life targets.
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stressful
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environment
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their likes and dislikes to reach
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score
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the research held by
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of Colombo 80% of
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never had
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of
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they were under
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level of education. If they had
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and
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knowledge about how they can manage the situation properly they will
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their problem in a nice way. Taking everything into consideration
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must have
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exam at least once a year
it
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helps them to keep their knowledge in mind as well as to focus on their life goals.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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