Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission outweighthe diadvantages ?

Each

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has different regulations for the

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fee

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for

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, there are museums which free and museums which charge a certain amount of money. Both regulations have advantages and disadvantages and I wholeheartedly disagree that the advantages of

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fees

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for

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visitors

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outweigh the disadvantages. It is

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the fact that charging

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for free can attract more

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to visit the

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which is more important than commercialising it. On the one hand, maintaining a

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requires a lot of resources for operation and without support money from specific organizations the

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needs to charge the

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an

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fee

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. The operational

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is needed to pay the staff, maintain the collections, and

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maintain the venue,

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, with the

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fee

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hopefully the management will be able to operate and expand the

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.

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, Monumen Jogja Kembali in Yogyakarta, Indonesia, charges $5 for

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to be able visitting the

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and with

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income, the

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is able to expand its collections and entertainment. Within

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fact,

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income from

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fees

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is a necessity for the operation of the

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.

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, some argue that the

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is a place to enhance the knowledge for

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who are not able to afford expensive experiences and charging

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with

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fees

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will spoil the expectation. As we know, there are a lot of historical places that are preserved to educate

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about certain

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and not anyone is able to afford to travel there.

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, the

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is expected to be an affordable place to broaden their knowledge.

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, charging the visitor for free can attract

people

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to come to the

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.

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, the Post

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in Jakarta, Indonesia, charges

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for free and

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, more

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keep attending the

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to spend their leisure time and nowadays, the Post

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is able to attract more

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and even tourists to enhance their knowledge about Indonesia's post

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. Because of the morality value, it is unnecessity for the

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to charge

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with certain of money because it is more important to preserve the

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rather than commercialize the

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.

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, charging

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for free can attract more

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and

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will be curious about the

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which go viral, and

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impact is more important to preserve the

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than commercialising the

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.

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both regulations have pros and cons, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages of

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fees

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because charging

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with

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fees

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can lower their interest in visiting the

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. So

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, whether the

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regulates

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both pros and cons.