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Some people think that teaching methodology in the modern classroom should be based on experiential learning while others believe that traditional approach is still the best. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?

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 opinion Teaching methodology should be based on the Traditional approach whereas others feel that the experimental
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 is suitable for a new generation .With the change in ,technology teaching should be based on
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conventional or experimental methods is
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of adopting experimental-based learning which is focused on innovative methods is the call of the hour. The advent of technology like the internet and digital media is penetrating everybody's life . It makes it imperative to adopt these changes for learning. Subjects like science where experiments are part of the syllabus need to be taught with
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 only Subjects like geography , environmental science can be taught with
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. Experimental teaching makes students involved in subjects and creates interest in students' minds.
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 very popular in schools today using blackboard , Conventional teaching is focused on classroom teaching where teachers are supposed to give lectures or dictation to teach children.
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 was followed across India. Most people who advocate
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 argue that
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 is a time-proven way of teaching . To sum it up ,Most of the time Technology advancement has benefited humankind. Experimental teaching is one of the best ways to teach
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the younger generation as they are exposed to laptops and mobiles. Kids find it easier to understand and able to memorise their lessons in any subject. conventional
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 Is focused on cramming and mugging up lessons whereas experimental-led teaching is focused on learning by doing . So I agree with the statement that teaching methodology in
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modern classrooms should be based on experimental learning.
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