Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case ? Do you think is a positive or negative development?
There is an increasing trend among youngsters that
using
their mobile devices for several hours in an intensive way. Because of the advanced technology, there are many matters Wrong verb form
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can
be done on mobile phones. Some people and I are of the belief that phenomenon is an alarming indicator of threat which endangers our infants’ life in terms of various aspects. The essay will manifest the reasons why I am convinced that Correct pronoun usage
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negativity
of Correct article usage
the negativity
usage
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of smartphone
smartphone
outweighs its positivity.
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To begin
with, the mobile applications and games
which are most likely targeted to
children influence Change preposition
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on
them to be violent. Change preposition
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In other words
, it can be said that the designers of video games
intended to present a
violent content in the game context. A prime example of Correct article usage
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game
is Add an article
a game
the game
PUPG
game, where the success of its challenge is mainly depending on committing horrible crimes Correct article usage
the PUPG
such
as robbing, stealing and killing and destroying. Thus
, it can be said that such
applications and games
like those should be banned by the authorities and only be accessed to
legal age.
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In addition
to that, the
adolescents have a difficulty in the way of Correct article usage
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communication
with people. To explain, the more spent time on phones, the less time they have to have a good conversation Replace the word
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that is
full of fun, emotions and good memories with the
family and Correct article usage
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the
friends which Correct article usage
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consequently
leads to bad psychological issues such
as autism and depression from young
age. As per a survey Add an article
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by
a group of university students in Egypt, a large scale of infants under Change preposition
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age
of 15 years old is preferring to be socially separated and not Add an article
the age
talking
to others. Wrong verb form
talk
Hence
, parents should monitor their adolescents and always try to enhance their morals and behaviors
.
In conclusion, after the essay has illustrated the mentioned reasons above, it can be said that not only the regulations on Change the spelling
behaviours
games
and applications will be the solution to that issue, but is
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also
the supervision of guardians on their infants and setting a plan for tuning their attitude.Submitted by dinaragab2005 on
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