You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays,
rules
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laws
are
significant
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part
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parts
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of
management
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process in countries.Without rule and law, different
type
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of
phenomenons
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come into play.Unlimited
fredoom
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freedom
is not a
functinonal
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functional
approach in terms of
public
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the public
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. I
agree
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onagree
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this
idea. Two basic
reason
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prompt me to consider
like
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this
.
Rules
and
laws
save
humans
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humans'
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life.
Secondly
, via
rules
and
laws
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humans take care of their own manner and it provides them self-control.
Acording
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According
to me,
rules
and
laws
that
made
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by
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governments
government
goverments
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governments
have
critical
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role in
citizens
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life.
Varios
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Various
type
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of films and books discuss
this
topic. What could happen if all
rules
and
laws
disappear
at
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least one night ? Of course, unacceptable
type
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of crime
occur
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in
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countries
countires
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countries
that do not have
laws
and
rules
. To
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exemplify
examplify
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exemplify
it, killing another one,
stolling
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strolling
money
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