A friend of yours is coming to stay in your house for a week while you are away on holiday. Write a letter to your friend to prepare them for their stay. In your letter Give your friend information about the location of your house Tell your friend what tasks you would like them to do each day Explain what he/she can do and see in your area

Dear John, How is it going? Hope you’re going well and having a great time. I’m just writing in order to inform you about my place where you're going to stay for some time, while I am on holiday. As you are aware, I'm

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currently

curently

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currently

leaving in a 2bhk villa near the Newtown area in the city of Kolkata, which is

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well known as the 'city of joy.

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stay

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my stay

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is quite far away from the airport than my old house, but there are excellent taxi facilities and public transportation, that help you to reach my place quickly. Once you moved in here, I owe you to do some daily tasks.

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, sorry to bother you but it's important.

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, every morning please water the plants in the

gerden

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garden

to keep them hydrated, if not they will die.

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, I'm not taking my pet dog along with me, so please provide the food based on the timetable, which is stuck on the bedroom wall. Though there are many famous places to visit, I would recommend you to visit one of the historical steel bridges which are located 500meters away from my villa don't forget

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to go

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for a cruise ship ride along the river Ganga. As well as there are many shopping malls around here, visit them

you

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if you

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get bored. Will catch up soon once I'm back from my holidays, hope you will have a good time here. Give me a buzz, if required. Yours lovingly, David

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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