Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach.

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In the

last

few decades, the public in growing countries has quickly expanded. The crowd now thinks that we should turn to genetically modified

seeds

to increase the production of food grains. In

this

essay, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages.

To begin

with the pros, In these times, many provinces have evolved and used the forming land for industries, multistory buildings, and malls for public facilities, leaving less agricultural land for forming. To elaborate, the former are making extra efforts in farming, but the results are not fulfilling their needs. We need genetically modified nuts so that we use less water and less land.

For example

, as per a survey by BBC News, Today is the pot-forming day, which is extremely well-known in Italy, and people are preparing their gardens at home as per requirement.

Thus

, citizens are eating fresh and organic vegetables and fruits.

Furthermore

, everyone has pros and cons.

This

has a serious effect on soil deformation and

also

causes an allergic reaction in the human body.

In other words

, when they use modified

seeds

, they

also

use chemicals.

For instance

according to

The Times of India, Genetically modified nuts

fulfill

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the production requirements, but they need more pesticides.

Hence

, thousands of members of the public are preying on crucial illnesses like cancer, high blood pressure, skin problems, and so many others. In conclusion, Genetically modified

seeds

had a good development at that time for food grains industries but they

also

had some effects on people’s health. Scientists will be trying to develop these types of

seeds

without the need for pesticides.

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