Some people think that to be successful in sports one has to have physical strength, however, some others think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Professional
athletes
are training rapidly to become stronger and achieve great
results
. Many different varieties of sports require strong resistance physically or mentally. Can mental
health
impact their
results
despite their strong body? In
this
essay, I will discuss how mentally strong
athletes
are more successful but
also
how some players are failed to showcase their best form despite their fitness level.
First
of all, many
athletes
exercise intensively to get stronger and stronger for each competition;
moreover
,
also
prepared for their mental
health
by participating in any form of practice. Remaining strong mentally may sound easier but very hard to measure.
For instance
, mentally strong
athletes
are not afraid of
results
and keep on trying until their desired result is reached.
Therefore
, many coaches ensure their
athletes
improve not only their fitness level and body but
also
their mentality overall. Before they become more candid, they need to train harder and harder.
Although
some people might think the
results
are not related to their mental
health
,
that is
not the case. The stronger mentality the athlete has, the higher chance of success waiting for them. On the other side, some
athletes
suffer badly in real competitions despite their training, preparation and fitness level. In
such
cases, not only their mental
health
issues aren't really known to many coaches but
also
the athlete only displayed their weaknesses during the actual competition sometimes. Unfortunately, those
athletes
may give up halfway before reaching their target. To illustrate
this
, some high jump
athletes
couldn't even attempt as soon as they see the big crowd in the stadium. The treatment to get them back on track isn't straightforward which requires investment in time and effort from the
athletes
, meanwhile, the coaches should provide decent chances for
athletes
with quality assistance and countermeasures. Until some
athletes
are able to overcome themselves after a series of self-training and learning from failures, I think mental
health
training should be part of their routines to avoid
such
cases. In conclusion, having strong mental
health
is the key factor in sports for
athletes
they should
also
remain physically strong for greater benefits. They should be building up both of
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as much as they wanted to become more successful. If both are stronger, the
athletes
reach a higher potential to achieve great
results
.
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