Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowladge or experiance
In modern life house companies have taken fast steps to solve housing's high demand. Some
people
say it's better to have strong quality materials to last
a long time, on the other hand
, others believe it should be more practical and easy to finish building in a short amount of time. In this
essay, I will be discussing both side's views.
First of all, we have people
who say homes must be heavy-duty to last
a long time. I tend to agree with them because of today's weather conditions that are happening around the world. For example
earthquakes and the amount of impact that bring to houses in terms of destabilizing the infecterctior and threatening to home distraction. So builders have to set a respected and proper demand of money from owners before attempting to start working on the project. Moreover
, engineers also
have a great responsibility to deliver good planning for builders to have optimal work, for people
's safety.
Others think that with cheaper materials they can have a decent place. However
, they don't know the risk that they are putting in workplace and home infections. For instance
, a 3D-painted home lacing a lot of support at least around the corners which can lead in case of crucial bad intensweathwer to catastrophic results. And puts human life in great danger.
In conclusion, government
should set rules and regulations to reduce the risk of house collapses. A witch can harm lives for things that could have been built. Add an article
the government
Also
, bad materials must be removed from stores, in the end, workers and everyone involved have the responsibility to ensure people
's safety.Submitted by abood291a on
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