Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter as feedback on the cookery
course
that I was lucky to attend. At , the beginning would like to thank you for the offer you put in teaching us all the food-related tips and tricks. I would like to that the
course
said Comprehensive and informative. It was very beneficial to learn new knife skills.
Also
, I liked that the
course
Covered the three main pillars of any meal, rarely, appetizers, wine courses, and desserts.
In addition
..... -Covering the side topics like Smoking is found useful. The
course
gave me great confidence to cook for my family and feel.
last
week I prepared my neighbours which included wreke more than 2 large rubber to a variety of plates.
Moreover
, since the
course
finished dinner is being prepared every day by myself which helped us to include healthier options in our diet.
Although
the
course
is very interesting and enjoyable, I would love to suggest doing a
second
part that Covers Asian Cuisine ,especially Japanese. Plates Coming from the Japanese Kitchen are very delicious but
also
need good skills to get the techniques night. Thanks again for the class. Please do not hesitate to contact us for any
further
information Yours faithfully, John Wick
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