A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, . describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team . summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts . say how you think the company should spend the money

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing

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letter to share my views about choosing between a sponsor for a sports

team

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and Open-air concerts.

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, I want to mention the current status of the local Children's sports

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. The

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has won a tournament conducted by the state council recently. Previously, the same

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won two local matches in the

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year. If your Company spends money on

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team

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for coaching, improving on-field conditions to practice and required individual facilities. The

team

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's performance will be much better than now. Open-air Concerts bring a different kind of environment to the community. It allows people to gather at one place to watch and eat something with all the neighbourhood at one location.

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, Company should divide the money by 70 % for the sports

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and the remaining % for the Open-air concerts as people expect both for refreshments. Please consider my requests and implement them. Yours Sincerely, Niranjan Reddy K.

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