Last month you had an overseas hoiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends.

Dear Sam and Tim, I’m writing
this
letter to you to thank you for your photos. I still remember the period that we spent together
last
month, and I believe that was the best holiday that
have
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spent. When I finished my holiday and return to my country, my boss asked me to prepare some
meeting
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for our new products. You know my job is sales manager and I need to
sale
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our product to clients. Recently, our company invented a new robot for families.
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, I was very busy after my holiday. I’m so sorry didn’t write a letter to you and express my
thankful
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for your friendly and helpful. Because that was my
first
time
travelled
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to your country.
This
summer I will finish my work and have two weeks reflaxble, I invite you can come and I will with you visit
some
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place
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and taste some traditional foods. If you have some
advise
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, please connect me. Thank you again for your photos. Best regards, Your
kevin
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Submitted by kevin. B on

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